Corbus Deep sea shark
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Corbus Deep sea shark
Stage 1: A leathery feeling egg that is a dark olive with brown stripes across it. It is quite heavy and is easily conceiled.
Stage 2: The youngling is quite small and ugly. You can see a slight resemblance to the adult but the fins are nothing but stubs at this point and it resembles an eel more than anything else. At this stage the creature only has 2 eyes on each side. The young shark spends all of it's time in the shallows.
Stage 3: The adolescent is starting to look more like it's adult counterpart. The body is still quite long but the fins are starting to elongate. The head is starting to take shape and the top jaw has stopped growing. Another set of eyes has formed and the adolescent starts to acclimate to lower depths.
Omega Stage (Working):
I've been working on him and he's starting to come together (Maybe). I will keep messing with him and get to work on the other stages (I don't see this being accepted).
If you want to take a shot at it feel free
Stage 2: The youngling is quite small and ugly. You can see a slight resemblance to the adult but the fins are nothing but stubs at this point and it resembles an eel more than anything else. At this stage the creature only has 2 eyes on each side. The young shark spends all of it's time in the shallows.
Stage 3: The adolescent is starting to look more like it's adult counterpart. The body is still quite long but the fins are starting to elongate. The head is starting to take shape and the top jaw has stopped growing. Another set of eyes has formed and the adolescent starts to acclimate to lower depths.
Omega Stage (Working):
I've been working on him and he's starting to come together (Maybe). I will keep messing with him and get to work on the other stages (I don't see this being accepted).
If you want to take a shot at it feel free
Last edited by Mega_Shark on Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:37 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Added flat color sprite)
Mega_Shark- Sergeant
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Re: Corbus Deep sea shark
Please give feedback or pointers. I could really use constructive comments.
Mega_Shark- Sergeant
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Re: Corbus Deep sea shark
They're supposed to be long, right? According to the descriptions..
I think the adult's body should be longer. Also..where's your light source? it seems to go anywhere on the sprite, instead of one precise direction.
I think the adult's body should be longer. Also..where's your light source? it seems to go anywhere on the sprite, instead of one precise direction.
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Re: Corbus Deep sea shark
I'm going to re sketch them today. I think overall they look too cartooney.
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