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Post by salayan Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:28 pm

this is the hellhound:hellhound and holyhound Hellho13hellhound; born from aggression and hate came from the underworld to set the galaxy in flames the hellhound was born lives in fiery hot places some even can be found if you go to the center of a planets molten rock core and some in volcanos ment to be the sighn of evil hellhounds have a nasty breath of fire stronger then dragon breath.they where born in balence whith the holyhounds.but when threatened there fur turns into fire.

this is the holyhound:hellhound and holyhound Holyho11just fur are these good
holyhound:made of all that is holy and justice the holyhound lives in freezing planets and freezing lands and some live in the clouds because they can floatand they have a breath of light that is as strong as the sun. they where born because the hellhound was born and they where needed to balance the galaxy and if the hellhound was born with out the holyhound there would be mayhem every where in the galaxy and if the holyhound was born bye its self there would be nothing for it to stop and nothing to do so the hollyhounds would have no meaning but for being pets so they need each other to balance the galaxy one holyhound is born after one person dies in the galaxy.

evo for hellhound:newbornhellhound:hellhound and holyhound Newbor10 a dog baby that has a fiery spirt and is very playfull and fun and daring.
kidhellhound:hellhound and holyhound Kidhel10that playful pup you new beafore is now very hot headed and territoryal and protective of you and now has horns you did not see beafor sprouting from its head.
adulthellhound:hellhound and holyhound Hellho13 now very strong and brave and loyal to you and you can`t take for walk anymore whithout him runing off and attacking someone and think if you had not domesticated it he would kill you whith no word and you stare at his head and see full grown horns at least no one will steal from you.

holyhoundevo:newbornholyhound:hellhound and holyhound Newbor11pupy oh cute you pet it in front of mother the mother gives you a grin you ask here to take it home and she nodes anything to keep my species alive you here in your head you turn around you point at her and say was that you? she nodes yes note: they can talk in your head.the pupy is very playful and brave he will even nibble on you to tell you he wana play he loves children and if he sees a volcano he will wine at it.

kidholyhound:hellhound and holyhound Kidhol10 now is even braver then before and very full of pride will stand up with chest pumped out to show hes pride when people walk by and say that is a handsome dog with beautiful fur

adultholyhound:hellhound and holyhound Holyho12strong brave loyal justice is his word and he has a amazing thing that can bring things that are dead back to life people call it the justice ray of light he this pet is now seeking that if a hellhound is causing trouble he will stop it this species now talks to you and most of them are used as police dogs that fight thugs and the thugs pets like the hellhound.


Last edited by salayan on Sun Jul 31, 2011 4:24 pm; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : deatal and bacrond)

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Post by Drakkon Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:29 pm

There would need to be a rational reason why their fur is made of fire. Could we also get some species background information?
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Post by salayan Sun Jul 31, 2011 2:15 pm

well if anyone wants to make the sprites for these they can because i am not a good computer artist

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Post by Drakkon Sun Jul 31, 2011 2:57 pm

All right, the concept for these creatures needs a lot of work. There's no way they'd plausibly exist at this point. Here's an idea for a rework:

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Hellhounds are aggressive, territorial creatures that live on hot planets such as Roon. In order to protect themselves from the heat, their thick, coarse dark gray fur works as a shield from the flame, and deflects heat. Their paw pads work similarly to their fur and works as a flame retardant. Their aggression causes only the bravest of creatures to go near them, because they attack everything and anything they set their eyes on. As their strongest form of defense, they contain a very limited gland that they can use to spit fire. Once they spit the liquid substance they generate, it catches fire on contact with the air, making them excessively deadly foes indeed. When mating, these creatures spit the substance onto their own fur - it does not harm them, and the ones with the largest flames generally attract the females.

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While similar to Hellhounds in general appearance, Holyhounds have a kinder temperament and are often used as pets for children. They're gentle in every way, and while they are carnivorous, they work more as scavengers so as not to kill the prey themselves. Their fur is a creamy-yellow similar to polar bears, as these creatures live in arctic regions as opposed to burning hot planets. Their fur is coveted by many, for it his soft and feels as though one might imagine a cloud to be like. A protection act had to be installed to keep poaching from happening to skin these benign creatures for their fur.
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Post by salayan Sun Jul 31, 2011 3:00 pm

thanks and i come back because i am going to edit the hell hound make the genarations

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Post by Voxezi Sun Jul 31, 2011 11:56 pm

We do not do fantasy creatures.

Even with Drak's amazing edits [nice job drak ;D] these still need a complete overhaul.
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Post by Drakkon Sun Jul 31, 2011 11:58 pm

Voxezi wrote:We do not do fantasy creatures.

Even with Drak's amazing edits [nice job drak ;D] these still need a complete overhaul.

Why thank you. c: /blushes xD

I can work on re-writes for the baby stages as well, and I did change colors in the descriptions to more realistic ones. I don't think the hellhounds need horns though. I'd say get rid of those all together. They can already spit fire (albeit limited) for Pete's sake.
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Post by Voxezi Mon Aug 01, 2011 1:20 am

Yes.
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Post by salayan Mon Aug 01, 2011 8:24 am

okay then take out the horns get ride of those

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