Creatures of Dante--Concepts

Because Dante's gonna need some creatures--these all tie into the quest described here, Dante's Inferno.
The creatures at 9 and 12 o'clock are predators, the other two are creatures domesticated by the Iaelo--the bat looking thing is akin to a dog, the one with the tounge is something between a horse and a cow.

Spoiler:

Colors are just ideas, not set in stone.

So, anyway, I need help refining the colors and concepts. The Uuim uses it's fins only to direct itself--it has gas-sacs all along it's spine to keep it afloat. In fact, all these animals have some gas-sacs.

Yes. Feedback pl0x. That's mostly what I'm after.

Oooh I like them! Thought the red one and the blue/green one look very wrong.. either anatomy or just they have a cartoony element (Mainly the blue/green one) the blue/green should be changed to a different color and have a ferocious face XD but the red one, something seems wrong with anatomy, idk

Rebsingh wrote:Oooh I like them! Thought the red one and the blue/green one look very wrong.. either anatomy or just they have a cartoony element (Mainly the blue/green one) the blue/green should be changed to a different color and have a ferocious face XD but the red one, something seems wrong with anatomy, idk

Yeah, I can definitely agree on the red one and the color of the blue one. I was running low on color ideas and just slapped the blue on on a whim, and for whatever reason the head of the red one just didn't want to look right. Which is why it's good these are just concept sketches, I suppose.
But the Oien is supposed to have a very non-ferocious face. It's supposed to be a like a dog, and the face is supposed to represent that. Perhaps the eye is a bit exaggerated--concept art, I was just doodling as things came into my head--but they are going to be big, round eyes. It has big teeth that could rip a throat out and big, soulful eyes to match.