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Post by DragonFlare Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:24 pm

chuchu wrote:
ignite444 wrote:

Now that I looks at 'em, the wings positions look a bit funny, but I want a second opinion on that.
I'm glad that wasn't just me. The wings also look kind of rubbery towards the tip, almost like they're inflatable.
I ment for it to look rubbery.
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Post by SilentSkieBlue Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:26 pm

It's probably because the tips are thick & round while the joints are thin & pointy. If that's how you meant it, I guess it's okay, but it does seem a little strange at first glance.

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Post by DragonFlare Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:35 pm

Okay guys, I need answers, not more questions. First: What should I do? Make the tips smaller, or, make the arm of the wing thicker? IF YOU POST YOU MUST ANSWER IN YOUR OPINION.
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Post by ignite444 Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:46 pm

Personally I like the rounded tips. Try making the arm of the wing thicker and see what it looks like.
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Post by DragonFlare Mon Apr 18, 2011 12:19 pm

Thanks Ignite. Sorry it took me so long, I had a hard week.
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I personaly like the rounded tips, gives it a sortof Vashta-flare.
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Post by ignite444 Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:37 pm

Looks better now. ^^
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Post by DragonFlare Sun Apr 24, 2011 11:06 pm

Sorry for being inactive and all, I aslo made one tiny edit on the wings, approve?

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Post by chuchu Mon Apr 25, 2011 12:24 am

It's looking beautiful.
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Post by Rebsingh Mon Apr 25, 2011 12:31 am

What's that yellow thing on the chest? It's been bothering me a lot. It looks out of place.
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Post by ignite444 Mon Apr 25, 2011 12:38 am

I think it's a belly stripe, like snakes or dragons have.
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Post by Rebsingh Mon Apr 25, 2011 12:41 am

it needs to be blended better. It looks funky and too bubbly.
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Post by DragonFlare Mon Apr 25, 2011 9:29 am

Does this look better Reb?
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Post by DragonFlare Mon Apr 25, 2011 11:26 am

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Here's the female, hows the looks of it?
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Post by Megablukk Mon Apr 25, 2011 12:26 pm

the head looks... different

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Post by ignite444 Mon Apr 25, 2011 8:48 pm

Not entirely sure I like the overhead view of it, plus the head shape is unrealistic imo.
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Post by DragonFlare Mon Apr 25, 2011 11:47 pm

ignite444 wrote:Not entirely sure I like the overhead view of it, plus the head shape is unrealistic imo.
Okie-dokie then. I'll sprite a new female. Wink
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Post by ignite444 Tue Apr 26, 2011 4:02 am

Please and thank you. Very Happy Try to keep to the same shape as the male.
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Post by DragonFlare Tue Apr 26, 2011 9:59 am

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"This is a very... Well... Plain brown egg...
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Post by ignite444 Tue Apr 26, 2011 9:49 pm

Not sure about that description. How about...

"This brown egg is rather plain"
"This egg is a dull brown"
"This egg is appears to be very energetic"
"This egg constantly shakes with energy"
"This egg constantly vibrates with energy"

*Shrugs* Personally I like the last two on that list.
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