The Vashta Bird
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Re: The Vashta Bird
I ment for it to look rubbery.chuchu wrote:I'm glad that wasn't just me. The wings also look kind of rubbery towards the tip, almost like they're inflatable.ignite444 wrote:
Now that I looks at 'em, the wings positions look a bit funny, but I want a second opinion on that.
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It's probably because the tips are thick & round while the joints are thin & pointy. If that's how you meant it, I guess it's okay, but it does seem a little strange at first glance.
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Okay guys, I need answers, not more questions. First: What should I do? Make the tips smaller, or, make the arm of the wing thicker? IF YOU POST YOU MUST ANSWER IN YOUR OPINION.
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Personally I like the rounded tips. Try making the arm of the wing thicker and see what it looks like.
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Thanks Ignite. Sorry it took me so long, I had a hard week.
I personaly like the rounded tips, gives it a sortof Vashta-flare.
I personaly like the rounded tips, gives it a sortof Vashta-flare.
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Looks better now. ^^
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Sorry for being inactive and all, I aslo made one tiny edit on the wings, approve?
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It's looking beautiful.
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What's that yellow thing on the chest? It's been bothering me a lot. It looks out of place.
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I think it's a belly stripe, like snakes or dragons have.
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Does this look better Reb?
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Here's the female, hows the looks of it?
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Not entirely sure I like the overhead view of it, plus the head shape is unrealistic imo.
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Okie-dokie then. I'll sprite a new female.ignite444 wrote:Not entirely sure I like the overhead view of it, plus the head shape is unrealistic imo.
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Please and thank you. Try to keep to the same shape as the male.
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"This is a very... Well... Plain brown egg...
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Not sure about that description. How about...
"This brown egg is rather plain"
"This egg is a dull brown"
"This egg is appears to be very energetic"
"This egg constantly shakes with energy"
"This egg constantly vibrates with energy"
*Shrugs* Personally I like the last two on that list.
"This brown egg is rather plain"
"This egg is a dull brown"
"This egg is appears to be very energetic"
"This egg constantly shakes with energy"
"This egg constantly vibrates with energy"
*Shrugs* Personally I like the last two on that list.
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